Tied tight,
She stood erect,
And glistened in the Cave of Delight.
Boldly they clashed,
But the duel was ended,
And she felt he was worthy.
Her heart throbbed at his touch,
And blood coursed through her veins,
As she felt his strength come over her.
This time,
Her surrender would be true,
She stood erect,
And glistened in the Cave of Delight.
Boldly they clashed,
But the duel was ended,
And she felt he was worthy.
Her heart throbbed at his touch,
And blood coursed through her veins,
As she felt his strength come over her.
This time,
Her surrender would be true,
And complete.
55
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excellent dear rasta man....
my, my, my....you do have a way with words. :) another great 55. i didn't have one AGAIN this week (last week i had nothing, this week busy & tired), but i did post a poem i wrote awhile back. hopefully that'll appease my fellow 55ers lol :)
I like the power of her submission.
Do tell!
Great 55!
Ummm...a little kinky rasta man for Friday....me likey! ;)
I sense steam in your 55! :0
Excellent job Peter, You do indeed have a way with words. I also dig the Coniferous shape of the story!
Thank you so much for visiting, and playing. Have a Great Week-End.
G-Mon
Dis is some good da kine, BrotherMan! Aloha-
I enjoyed reading this piece. I read it several times as a matter of fact.
Sounds like my kinda girl! One that surrenders completely -- but only to the one worthy. yeah. My kinda girl for sure.
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